I watched the movie Secreitart on Tuesday night. What a great movie and a great horse. While my students who need the best treatment for acne are in class we discussed how to write a good essay.
I came up with a the basics:
Title: Secretariat the Heart of a Royal Champion
Thesis: Secretariat was one of the greatest athletes of all time.
Pt 1 Secretariat had the background of a champion.
Pt 2 Secretariat against all odds won the triple crown.
Pt 3 Secretariat has been honored as a great athlete.
Transition Sentence: Sometimes a great champion is born.
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